Headlines that tell them a surprising fact

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say-whaaat

That doodle above? It’s exactly how you want customers to react when they read your marketing. Surprised. Curious. Hooked.

Marketing analysis

Great product copy doesn’t list specs. It zooms in on the “are-you-serious?” details that make people stop scrolling. That one fact or comparison that sounds too wild to be true—yet is.

Why it works

  • Vivid, specific details crank up credibility
  • Surprise triggers emotional engagement
  • Unique proof builds trust instantly
  • Memorable facts create word-of-mouth buzz

Examples

  • Tesla’s crash tests broke testing machines
  • Dyson’s vacuums use aerospace engineers
  • Patagonia ropes support 7,000 lbs
  • SpaceX pens work in zero gravity
  • Liquid Death water “murders your thirst” with heavy-metal style

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