About page lacks key elements

About Pages
Mar 24, 2022
bad about page mudwtr.com
The copy is not the problem. Its how it is displayed.
  1. Huge blocks of text is hard to read. The text should be broken up into 2-4 sentence paragraphs and/or bullet points.
  2. No images. When speaking of the founders and team, lets see how they look. Attaching a face to a name adds an extra layer of trust. Which gets you closer to the sale.
  3. No product shots.