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No jargon. No fluff. Just a headline that makes you feel something.
“Talk to customers like you know them. Because you do.” That opener sets a tone of confidence and connection—then the subhead locks in what the product actually does: turns customer data into personalized marketing.

Why it works

  • Emotional pull first, logic second
  • Short sentences that sound human
  • Builds curiosity, resolved by the subhead
  • Matches tone to promise: personal, direct, warm

Real-world parallels

  • Apple: “Think different.” Mystery + identity.
  • Mailchimp: “Send better email.” Clear, simple, actionable.
  • Squarespace: “Everything you need to sell anything.” Broad, then clarified visually.
  • Slack: “Where work happens.” Ambiguous but intriguing, explained by demo.

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