Awesome copy announcing “Once”

once-software

37Signals didn’t just write a sales page for Once.com—they wrote a manifesto. Instead of monthly bills, they pitch software you buy once and own forever.

Marketing Analysis

The heatmap shows something wild: readers’ eyes go straight to the bottom—the P.S., signature, and launch details—before reading the story. This means the message structure is working like a funnel: intrigue at the top, clarity in the middle, and credibility + action at the bottom.

Why It Works

  • Contrarian hook: attacks the SaaS model everyone else worships.
  • Storytelling: nostalgia for “owning what you paid for.”
  • Strong rhythm: short, declarative sentences make the copy feel confident.
  • Visual flow: blue background, clean spacing, and center-aligned text slow readers down—on purpose.
  • Trust anchor: signed note from Jason Fried makes it personal.

Examples

  • Dollar Shave Club’s anti-razor-commercial rant.
  • Liquid Death mocking bottled water culture.
  • Basecamp’s “We don’t work 80 hours a week” campaign.
  • Notion’s retro “own your notes” pitch to Evernote users.

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