Instagram ad needs a more specific headline

At first glance I didn't know this ad was for on-demand photography book printing. I thought they just sold books. They did write more about there service in the post description but who stops to read those when scrolling a feed. I would simply overlay the description text on the post image.

Instagram ad needs a more specific headline

Bryan Johnson collaboration hair restoration ad

Camtasia New Monthly Plan

Dinner with strangers friend meeting service

Is your food making you "LAZY" Infographic

Rand Fishkin's "Audience Influence Spending" Slide

Stopped all paid spending, revenue went UP

Bryan Johnson collaboration hair restoration ad

Camtasia New Monthly Plan

Dinner with strangers friend meeting service

Is your food making you "LAZY" Infographic

Rand Fishkin's "Audience Influence Spending" Slide

Stopped all paid spending, revenue went UP

Command Palette

Command Palette

Instagram ad needs a more specific headline

Bryan Johnson collaboration hair restoration ad

Camtasia New Monthly Plan

Dinner with strangers friend meeting service

Is your food making you "LAZY" Infographic

Rand Fishkin's "Audience Influence Spending" Slide

Stopped all paid spending, revenue went UP

Bryan Johnson collaboration hair restoration ad

Camtasia New Monthly Plan

Dinner with strangers friend meeting service

Is your food making you "LAZY" Infographic

Rand Fishkin's "Audience Influence Spending" Slide

Stopped all paid spending, revenue went UP