The We Promise You This: Headline Formula

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Want buyers to trust you right away? Drop a bold guarantee. It flips their hesitation into excitement by saying, “We promise you this result or you get compensated.”

Why a Bold Guarantee Works

  • Removes the risk from the buyer’s decision
  • Shows total confidence in your offer
  • Makes your promise specific and measurable
  • Turns a “maybe later” into “I’ll try it now”

Real-World Examples

  • Gym: “Lose 30 pounds or we’ll pay for a month at another gym.”
  • Literary agency: “No book deal in 6 months? We’ll find you new representation.”
  • Marketing course: “Double your leads in 90 days or full refund.”
  • Coaching program: “Land your first client or we keep working with you free.”

Guarantees like these make buying feel safe and exciting at the same time.

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