About page lacks key elements
The copy is not the problem. Its how it is displayed.
- Huge blocks of text is hard to read. The text should be broken up into 2-4 sentence paragraphs and/or bullet points.
- No images. When speaking of the founders and team, lets see how they look. Attaching a face to a name adds an extra layer of trust. Which gets you closer to the sale.
- No product shots.